Lightcap experiment X003

24 hour copy and structure sprint

Landing Page Sprint

A fast, opinionated upgrade for your landing page. You send your current page (or draft) and I return a teardown, paste-ready copy, and a section outline in 24 hours.

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This is not a full redesign. It is a sharp copy and structure pass that you can ship immediately.

What you get (delivered as a single doc)

  • Teardown
    What is unclear, what is missing, and what is costing you conversions.
  • Paste-ready copy
    Hero, subhead, benefit bullets, CTAs, and key section copy.
  • Section outline
    What to include, in what order, and why.

Built for founders who want clarity

If your landing page feels "fine" but not sharp, the problem is usually positioning and sequencing. This sprint gives you a cleaner story and the exact words to ship.

  • Make the first 10 seconds count
    Clear promise, specific audience, and a CTA that matches intent.
  • Turn features into reasons
    Benefits with proof points, not adjective soup.
  • Give your page a spine
    Sections that answer questions in the right order.

Sample output

you get something this concrete

This is the vibe. I take vague, internal-sounding copy and turn it into a specific promise, with bullets you can paste into your hero.

Before
All in one platform to streamline your workflow
  • Modern, easy to use interface
  • Powerful features for teams
  • Boost productivity and collaboration
After
Ship landing pages that say the quiet part out loud
  • One sentence promise your best customer instantly recognizes
  • Benefit bullets that answer "why you" (with proof hooks)
  • CTA wording that matches the next step you actually want
Your actual doc is tailored to your product and audience. This section is just a quick preview of how the output feels.

Pricing

24 hour turnaround

Basic

$249 one time
  • Teardown + paste-ready copy + section outline
  • One landing page, one offer
  • Delivered within 24 hours
Buy Basic
Best if you want the cleanest version of your current story.

Priority first in queue

$399 one time
  • Everything in Basic
  • Priority handling (you go first)
  • Great if your launch is time-sensitive
Buy Priority
Best if you want certainty on timing.

FAQ

What counts as a landing page?

A single page whose job is to convert a reader into one action: join the waitlist, book a call, start a trial, or buy. It can be a web page, Notion doc, Framer draft, or a Google Doc.

What is the scope?

One page, one core offer, one audience. Copy and structure only. I will not ship code, create assets, or do multiple page flows. If you want a second page, buy a second sprint.

How does turnaround work?

24 hours starts when I have your page link and any context. Priority means you are handled first if multiple sprints are in the queue.

Do you offer refunds?

If you send the page and I miss the 24 hour window, you can request a full refund. If the deliverable is sent on time, refunds are generally not offered since this is a time-based service.

Ready to ship a sharper story?

Pick a tier, then reply to your receipt with the link to your landing page. That is it.

Buy Basic ($249) Buy Priority ($399)
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